Hi everyone,
I’ve never been an interactive presentation before! Thank you for this.
You are all so clever with your technology. You must have a really excellent teacher! All I can say is WOW and thrice times WOW.
Hope you’re all boogying with your budgies and walking your iguanas!
See you in May,
Brian
Dear Mrs Duxbury,
I agree with everything that you wwrote in your comment. I really enjoyed doing these biographies! It was great fun especially as we used I.C.T in our Literacy! 6D’s lessons are EVER so fun!
From Aamina N
Dear Mr Moses,
I can agree on the part where you said ‘You must have a really excellent teacher!’ It is really true, our teacher (Mrs Duxbury)is quite phenomenal. I am aso excited to see you in May.
Dear Mr Moses,
I sure do agree with your comment though I am not sure that I am walking with an iguanna as I will be too scared! I agree when you wrote ‘You must have a really excellent teacher!’
6D have an amazing teacher!
Wow! Aamina your Slide Rocket was amazing because you made your writing nice and clear so it is easy to read. Also, because you have made it look really colourful. I hope to see another Slide Rocket from you.
Wow well done Aamina you have done really well with your Brian Moses Sliderocket. You have included plenty of good facts. Well done for setting it out Early life ,school life and put it into diffrent pahrgrapsh. Keep up the good work.
Dear Emily,
Thank you for your comment. Thank yoou also for saying that I have included plenty of good facts. The only reason why is because of that Cover It Live session we did before Christmas. I hope that you carry on leaving comments on our blog.
From Aamina N
Dear Aamina,
I really like your slide rocket. I like how you have added some adjectives and super openers,to make your sentances more interesting. I also really like how you have made it colourful but the writing is still clear to read. Maybe next time, just check you have not repeated yourself, such as ‘…His proudest moment is the birth of his two daughters…’ (on the 5th slide and the 7th slide). Overall I really liked reading it. Well done Aamina, and keep up the good work.
From Julia
Dear Julia,
Thank you for your amazing comment! Some of the feedback will really help me in my work. Thank you for your wish. It shows that you were paying close attention to what you have just read. I wonder if you learnt something new after reading my work?
From Aamina N
I really liked going through your Brian Moses biography. I remember you telling me about Brian Moses visit and how it was cancelled because of the snow! Well done, keep up the good work!
From your very proud mum!xx
dear Aamina,
i think this work is fabouluos i loved the way that you described brain moses i thought that it was amazamongos it was lovely,tallented and well written, I THINK THAT DESERVES A BIGGGGG CLAP!!!
Dear Saarah,
Thank you for commenting on my work as I asked you to! REMEMBER YOUR CAPITAL LETTERS though I will let you off as your in year 3! I wonder what amazamongous means? Thank you again for commenting on my work.
From your cousin,
Aamina
February 7th, 2013 at 6:07 pm
Hi everyone,
I’ve never been an interactive presentation before! Thank you for this.
You are all so clever with your technology. You must have a really excellent teacher! All I can say is WOW and thrice times WOW.
Hope you’re all boogying with your budgies and walking your iguanas!
See you in May,
Brian
February 7th, 2013 at 8:54 pm
Thank you Mr Moses, the children are very proud of their work and really enjoued creating these biographies. We look forward to you vsiting us in May.
April 5th, 2013 at 1:36 pm
Dear Mrs Duxbury,
I agree with everything that you wwrote in your comment. I really enjoyed doing these biographies! It was great fun especially as we used I.C.T in our Literacy! 6D’s lessons are EVER so fun!
From Aamina N
February 8th, 2013 at 7:55 am
Dear Mr Moses,
I can agree on the part where you said ‘You must have a really excellent teacher!’ It is really true, our teacher (Mrs Duxbury)is quite phenomenal. I am aso excited to see you in May.
April 1st, 2013 at 1:31 pm
Dear Yahya,
I am sure that the rest of 6D agree with your comment! I am also very excited to see Mr Moses in May!
April 1st, 2013 at 1:30 pm
Dear Mr Moses,
I sure do agree with your comment though I am not sure that I am walking with an iguanna as I will be too scared! I agree when you wrote ‘You must have a really excellent teacher!’
6D have an amazing teacher!
February 7th, 2013 at 8:33 pm
Wow! Aamina your Slide Rocket was amazing because you made your writing nice and clear so it is easy to read. Also, because you have made it look really colourful. I hope to see another Slide Rocket from you.
From Nathan H
April 1st, 2013 at 1:33 pm
Dear Nathan,
Thank you for your comment! I have only done such an amazing slide rocket because of Mrs Duxbury…
From Aamina N
February 8th, 2013 at 8:18 am
Amazing Aamina thjis is fabulous because you made it colourful did lots of slids and made it easy for the reader to read.
From Daniel B
April 1st, 2013 at 1:34 pm
Dear Daniel,
Thank you for taking the time out and commenting on my work. Remember to always proofread through your work!
From Aamina N
February 8th, 2013 at 6:56 pm
Wow well done Aamina you have done really well with your Brian Moses Sliderocket. You have included plenty of good facts. Well done for setting it out Early life ,school life and put it into diffrent pahrgrapsh. Keep up the good work.
From your friend Emily 6D
April 1st, 2013 at 1:56 pm
Dear Emily,
Thank you for your comment. Thank yoou also for saying that I have included plenty of good facts. The only reason why is because of that Cover It Live session we did before Christmas. I hope that you carry on leaving comments on our blog.
From Aamina N
February 15th, 2013 at 11:13 am
Dear Aamina,
I really like your slide rocket. I like how you have added some adjectives and super openers,to make your sentances more interesting. I also really like how you have made it colourful but the writing is still clear to read. Maybe next time, just check you have not repeated yourself, such as ‘…His proudest moment is the birth of his two daughters…’ (on the 5th slide and the 7th slide). Overall I really liked reading it. Well done Aamina, and keep up the good work.
From Julia
April 1st, 2013 at 2:13 pm
Dear Julia,
Thank you for your amazing comment! Some of the feedback will really help me in my work. Thank you for your wish. It shows that you were paying close attention to what you have just read. I wonder if you learnt something new after reading my work?
From Aamina N
March 5th, 2013 at 9:13 pm
I really liked going through your Brian Moses biography. I remember you telling me about Brian Moses visit and how it was cancelled because of the snow! Well done, keep up the good work!
From your very proud mum!xx
April 1st, 2013 at 2:15 pm
Dear Mum,
Thank you for your comment! Well done for doing your homework. Fortunately, Mr Moses will hopefully be coming in May!
April 1st, 2013 at 1:50 pm
dear Aamina,
i think this work is fabouluos i loved the way that you described brain moses i thought that it was amazamongos it was lovely,tallented and well written, I THINK THAT DESERVES A BIGGGGG CLAP!!!
April 5th, 2013 at 1:33 pm
Dear Saarah,
Thank you for commenting on my work as I asked you to! REMEMBER YOUR CAPITAL LETTERS though I will let you off as your in year 3! I wonder what amazamongous means? Thank you again for commenting on my work.
From your cousin,
Aamina