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Cover it live session with Pie Corbett
Today, in our Cover it Live session with Pie Corbett I learnt where to use commas and when I need to use commas. Furthermore, I learnt a lot more adjectives like ‘ feline and demonic ‘ and how to use them in a sentence. It helped me to do more descriptive sentences like when we had to write sentences about the picture of a cat. It was so fun today I hope we can do something else with Pie Corbett like a Skype session. I liked how Pie Corbett set us to do challenges and up level his sentences. One of the sentences up levelled sentences I did was ‘ Glaring, the jet black cat’s beady eyes peered at a dwarf like man as he strolled down the deserted street ‘.
I really enjoyed the cover it live session and I hope we do another one so KEEP BLOGGING 6D!!
7 Responses to “Cover it live session with Pie Corbett”
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February 1st, 2013 at 4:25 pm
Hello Nathan,
Wow! That’s fantastic that you got to learn something new Nathan! I think in your post there was a few long sentences so just read it back.
My sisters teacher said to her: put your finger on one comma, and then put your finger on another and see if they’re too far apart or not.
Anyway, great blogging and keep it up!
Maddie x
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February 1st, 2013 at 4:28 pm
Hello Maddie,
I see you’ve visited 6D’s blog! Fantastic comment by the way; you’re growing up like me!
Mr Darling has great advice for punctuation, so if you do need any help, he’s the man to go to!
I do agree, really well done and keep it up!
Chloe
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February 1st, 2013 at 7:19 pm
Wow I hope you all had a great time, it must be good getting to do a live writing session with Pie Corbett. well I hope you all had a great time and did lots of fun things.
February 2nd, 2013 at 8:40 pm
Dear Kenzie,
We all had a great time, it was a fantastic to know that we were actually writing with the Pie Corbett. If you try hard, ON THE BLOG, then you may also get a chance to do a live writing session with Pie Corbett.
SO KEEP BLOGGING!
February 2nd, 2013 at 8:45 pm
Dear Nathan,
Wow! It is really great to see that you have learn some thing new such as the adjective ‘demonic’.It is also great to know that you enjoyed the live writting session with Mr Mitchell and Mr Corbett.
Next time just remember to proof read your work and to check the length of sentences and if there is a need of full stops or just commas. Other than that WELL DONE!
KEPEP ON BLOGGING
From your classmate Yahya
February 4th, 2013 at 7:06 pm
Thank you every body for your wonderful comments and I will take on board all of the things you have said. I hope all of you are blogging a lot and doing comments. KEEP UP THE GOOD BLOGGING!!
February 8th, 2013 at 2:15 pm
Dear Nathan,
Wow I like your adjective ‘demonic’ I have been writing a biography not about Pie Corbett but about Brian Moses a famous childrens poet, I really like his poems I think they are really creative wel;l done!