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Charlotte’s Rain poem – for Brian Moses
Drip drip drip ,
Drop drop drop ,
Pitter patter pitter patter pitter patter ,
Splash splash splash ,
Tiperty tap tap tiperty tap tap tiperty tap tap ,
Splosh splosh splosh ,
Plip plop plip plop plip plop ,
Tap tap tap ,
SPLASH !
13 Responses to “Charlotte’s Rain poem – for Brian Moses”
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January 21st, 2013 at 6:15 pm
Hi everyone,
Great to see so many of your poems appearing on your blog. So sorry I couldn’t be with you all today but look forward to our internet session tomorrow. Glad you’ve all enjoyed the snow – my dog has too (Not so sure about the chickens!)
Speak soon,
Brian
January 29th, 2013 at 4:16 pm
Thank you Mr Moses ! How many chickens do you have ? What are their names ? I have really enjoyed the snow and I am looking forward to the next snowfall ! My auntie has a dog called Otley and he loves the snow too!
From Chaerlotte D
January 22nd, 2013 at 8:40 pm
Charlotte, this poem is very interesting and represents rain very well. Good job and keep up the brilliant work!
January 29th, 2013 at 4:18 pm
Thank you Caitlin ! I will try and keep up the good work , have you ever wanted to have some quiet but then all of a sudden it starts to pour down ? That has happened to me a lot !
From Charlotte D
January 23rd, 2013 at 5:41 pm
Charlotte, the poem that you have writen is really good. Did you come up with it at home, or at school for your work.
Lauren, Lonshall
January 29th, 2013 at 4:20 pm
Hello Lauren ,
I came up with it at home , listening to the rain falling in my garden .I rally like my poem and thank you for your comment !
From Charlotte D
January 23rd, 2013 at 6:23 pm
Great job Charlotte! I had to come and have a look at your work, it sounds really good! Well done!
Chloe
Lyons Hall
QUAD-BLOGGING.
January 29th, 2013 at 4:22 pm
Hello Chloe ,
I love quad blogging with your class !I am proud of my poem and I’m glad you liked it and wanted to read it ! Thank you for your comment !
From Charlotte D
January 23rd, 2013 at 7:57 pm
I really like your poem its great, well done!!!!
January 29th, 2013 at 4:24 pm
Thank you Brenda ! I’m very glad that you liked my poem!Have you ever written a poem about rain ? If yes , I would love to read it !
From Charlotte D
January 24th, 2013 at 5:24 pm
Dear Charlotte,
Your poem is fantastic! keep it up.
from Aamina.I
January 25th, 2013 at 2:02 pm
Well done Im looking forword to som more of you work on the blog.:)
January 29th, 2013 at 4:26 pm
Thank you Aamina and Ben !I’m glad you liked my poem , Ben I am happy that you like our blog ! Thank you for your lovely comments !
From Charlotte D