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As the light flared over the blackened lands, a reluctant sun slowly broke the horizen. Entangled in mists, the fireball fought to break the cloud line. Shimmering and stuttering, the eternal light had now lit the surrounding area. The sun was born.
This is really really good.
how amazing is this
Harrison this would make a fantastic story opening. Where did you get your wonderful descriptive phrases from? My children in my class like to steal phrases from books they read and call them magpie phrases. These are kept in their magpie books to use in their writing. Have a look at Brooke’s story opening on our web page http://y56.athersleysouthprimary.net/2013/01/11/my-story/
It looks like you have tried very hard. You have used lots of powerful words. Well done !
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