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100 word challenge- Aamina

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Commented on– 74.East Boldon Junior School – Ellie

Commented on- 86.100 WC- Week 9 Fizzah Frizinghall

Now, It was late at night and no one wanted the last galaxy chocolate piece on the glossy, white plate.  I was dying to have it however, my mum said “You have already had 5 pieces and everyone else have had two”.  I slowly crept into bed, but couldn’t resist just having 5 I wanted more! It was so delicious.  I quietly, tiptoed down stairs to see the piece of chocolate still there; all alone – I felt sorry for it and it was winking at me so I did the right thing and quickly reached out for it;  as my fingers drew closer and closer…Oh no!

 

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