100 word challenge #7 Harrison

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All I could see were two red eyes, four yellow ones and a sickly green one, that blinked on and off. Either I was still dreaming I was in a haunted forest or several unnamed horrors had invaded my bedroom. I opted for the latter and did what any true blooded hero, or in my case dozy eyed fool, would do; I unleashed the only weapon at my disposal. I hit it with Bong (James Bong) my fluffy gorilla! Suddenly the bedroom light came on and Dad stormed in demanding to know why I was demolishing the clock radio!


5 Responses to “100 word challenge #7 Harrison”

  1.   Mrs Duxbury Says:

    Harrison, I think there are authors all around the world that will marvel at what a wonderful writer you are! I know I certainly do! You should be so proud of your wonderful imagination and skill at creating such a fabulous story in just 100 words.
    From your very proud teacher!


  2.   Mrs Tucker Says:

    Harrison, this brought a smile to my face – what a fabulous imagination you have! I will encourage our Y6 children to read this next week. 🙂


  3.   Mister Unwin Says:

    ThIs is fabulous writing – I particularly liked your use of humour to engage the reader. Keep taking risks in your writing – there are many authors that would be very proud of those 100 words.


  4.   lizzy Says:

    Wow Harrison you have made my day what a wonderful story you have put a smile on my face 🙂 and may i ask is this a comady story? 🙂 keep up the good work


  5.   harrisonm Says:

    Thank you for the comments.


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