Oct
28

A fabulous Live Writing session

Filed Under (General News) by on 28-10-2012 and tagged ,

Thank you to those of you who were able to make it tonight…this shows that you really do want to become better writers. A big thank you to Mr Hitchen (from Falcons Girls school) and Mrs Skinner who also joined in tonight.

Here are the pictures we used. Read through the session and look at some of the amazing sentences that were created in the session. Perhaps you could magpie some of these and make them your own by uplevelling them to make a great paragraph. Make sure you say whose work you are using.

Have fun.  Click here to hear the fireworks.         Fireworks Soundclip



5 Responses to “A fabulous Live Writing session”

  1.   CharlotteW Says:

    1. A comment from Caitlin Duxbury
    As I glared at the whooshing tendrils of colour, my eyes started to glow with excitement. The pitch – black sky sucked in the vibrant colours as the crackled and popped like animals leaping around an African felt. The colours burst like an exploding rainbow of joy!
    Upleved!
    Glaring at the whoosing tendrils of blazzing fire, my eyes light up like magic! Vibrant colours craking and popping like wild animals! Exploding rainbows of joy, burst into fireworks!

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  2.   Caitlin Duxbury Says:

    As I glared at the whooshing tendrils of colour, my eyes started to glow with excitement. The pitch – black sky sucked in the vibrant colours as the crackled and popped like animals leaping around an African velt. The colours burst like an exploding rainbow of joy and the tips shot round like fireflies being attracted by a glistening star in a pool of darkness.

    By Caitlin Duxbury

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  3.   katie 5B Says:

    Wow i had the best time ever on cover it live

    THANK YOU MRS DUXBURY!!!

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