Oct
27

100 WC Julia

Filed Under (General News) by on 27-10-2012 and tagged ,

Beep. Beep. That was all the machine was doing. Mum is in a coma, and has been asleep for ages.  There were wired tubes flowing in and out of her body. “What is that?”  I asked my dad, pointing to one of the tubes.   He shrugged his shoulders, and walked off to the nurse, who was  standing outside the door.  Eventually, we all got bored and went to the cafateria for lunch.  The food was horrible and I didn’t want to eat any of it.  I asked my dad, “When are we next going to go to school?”  “Tomorrow maybe.” He replied in a mumble.

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4 Responses to “100 WC Julia”

  1.   Liz Goddard (TEAM 100WC) Says:

    Hi Julia,

    This is an unusual story. It is sad and doesn’t really end. I wonder if you had a much longer story in mind but couldn’t complete it in 100 words.

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    •   julia Says:

      Dear Liz,
      thank you for such a great comment, and yes I did have another story in line and hope to finish it soon, so then I can post iy on the blog.
      From Julia

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  2.   kenzie Says:

    Wow I really like your 100 wc. It is also unusual but I really do like it.Well done

    from Kenzie 6D

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    •   julia Says:

      Dear Kenzie,
      thank you Kenzie I enjoy doing the 100 WC, do you? I hope to see some more of your writing on the blog.
      From Julia.

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