Oct
18

Yahya’s Halloween storybird

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Defective Detective on Storybird



8 Responses to “Yahya’s Halloween storybird”

  1.   Katie Stubbins Says:

    Nice story I liked the picturs matching the story.

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    •   YahyaP Says:

      Dear Katie,
      Thank you very much for your comment, I am glad you enjoyed reading it! Did you listen to the audio boo?

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  2.   Maggie Stubbins Says:

    I really like your story .It was fab! You should write more stories . Our teacher had made us a blog why don`t you check it out soon. Maggie

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    •   Yahya Says:

      Thank you very much for writting me such a gret comment.Maybe you could create your own storybird and then get back to me so I can see it aswell.

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  3.   AlexG Stubbins Says:

    Very nice reading and a very good book.

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    •   YahyaP Says:

      Dear Alex,
      Thank you for your comment, although I would like to now what part of the story did you find it was very nice?

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  4.   CharlotteW Says:

    I like your story becaue your pictures connect with the writing on each page! It was a great story, very good! I think you need to read through that piece of work carefully, because most of your sentences do not make sense!

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    •   Yahya Says:

      Thank you for such a great comment. I also do like your advice as it does tell me to proof read my work.Maybe you could create your own storybird aswell.
      From Yahya

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