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100 word challenge by sean smyth

Filed Under (General News) by on 16-10-2012 and tagged ,

The tempreture dropped suddenly and the sun became black,then it became normal again, for a few days all the plants were black and the dinasaurs went weak so they couldnt hunt.The next day the dinasaurs decided to switch thier food but it didnt make any difference, so the dinasaurs decided to make there own food but this didnt work. All the dinasaurs died out and became extinct. …………………………………………………………………………………………………. SOME FUNKY FACTS. The velocerapter was one of the fastest land animals on earth, The long neck had the longest neck of all the dinasaurs. The t rex had the largest razor like teeth and was the most ferocious of dinasaurs



3 Responses to “100 word challenge by sean smyth”

  1.   CharlotteW Says:

    Sean, that was great! I like how you added some facts as your 100 word challenge! You used the prompt in an amazing way, the sun went dark! Why did the sun go dark?
    Charlotte.W

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  2.   Mr Foster (Team 100WC) Says:

    Dear Sean,

    I really liked your story especially the facts you provided. You have mixed up fiction and non fiction well.

    Mr Foster – Shrewsbury International School Bangkok

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  3.   CharlotteW Says:

    Well done Sean! You used great wow words and added facts!

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