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100WC Julia

Filed Under (General News) by on 14-10-2012 and tagged ,

Ready to investigate, I stepped inside the museame.  Something had been stolen and guess who they got to investigate.  Thay said it was the necalace from Titanic!  I took the lift up to the third floor.  Rapidly searching for the room, I came across a libary full of books from centuary’s ago.  My fingernail scraped along the spine of the book creating a shiver to run up my back, from the dust.  Through the corner of my eye I saw a black figure.  The temperature dropped suddenly.  It grabbed hold of me; putting it’s hand infront of my mouth.

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One Response to “100WC Julia”

  1.   Mrs Duxbury Says:

    Wow Julia, what a great piece of writing and all in just 100 words. Well done! I especially like the sentence
    ‘My fingernail scraped along the spine of the book creating a shiver to run up my back, from the dust’…what a great image being created in my head. Well done!
    I am sure as you read through this again, you will spot the spelling mistakes that you have made. Remember to always read through your work Julia.

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