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Please use the wonderful sentences that you created in tonight’s Cover It Live session and add it as a comment.  I am sure we are going to get lots of fabulous writing fromyou all.



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  1.   NathanM Says:

    The tractors ploughing through the fields planting scumptious corn.
    The gargantuan tree house hangs in mid air waiting for its owner to come back and get tucked up for the night.
    I really wish I could have one of those spectacular tree houses in my back garden.Unfortunatly my garden is not big enogh. (Anyway my dad couldnt build one anytime of year.)

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    •   Mrs Duxbury Says:

      Nathan, these are great sentences, however 2 of your sentences start with the same opener. Please can edit this for me using wonderful openers.

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  2.   annalese Says:

    The wind wistled and knocked everthing out of the tree house.The birds tweet “Rain Rain go away come back again an other day” in a soft sweet voice.The golden grass swished side to side. Suddenly the tree moved with a creek.

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  3.   kenzie Says:

    I think it is a big cosy tre house,in the middle of a big fluffy field full of corn or golden wheat.Eventhough the tree house looks a bit scruffy and old I think it will be very cosy inside.

    I love the long twirley stairs leading into the tree house. The wind was coming and it whisteld through the corn or wheat in the fluffy field.The farmer was coming to collect all the corn or golden wheat.

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  4.   NathanM Says:

    Trudeling tractors ploughing through the fields planting scumptious corn.
    In the middle of nowhere, the
    gargantuan tree house hangs in mid air waiting for its owner to come back and get tucked up for the night.
    I really wish I could have one of those spectacular tree houses in my back garden.Unfortunatly, my garden is not big enough. (Anyway my dad couldnt build one anytime of year.)

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  5.   Harrison Says:

    Slowly, the jet black clouds creeped defeningly over the golden feilds inialating everything in sight! The hopeful treehouse stood at the center of the blackness being struck by the destructive storm! Suddenly, the storm took down the treehouse with a blast!

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  6.   Aamina N Says:

    Swiftly, the neighbourhoods belongings had all been murdered in the harsh tornado. Their belongings had been squashed into diminutive pieces layed scattered on the ground.

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  7.   YahyaP Says:

    The Sorrowful well lay next to the clock as it ticked away and the well dryed up solemnly.Consequently, the tree lay quietky as it’s poor friend was dying away. The guitaer played a peaceful melody, as the inky black clouds romed over the tree house. The deppressed trumpet lay there quitley due to the fact high pitch voice did not come into use.

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  8.   Caitlin W Says:

    Slowly, I wandered into a field full of bright yellow hay and brown horses with lots of red and black tractors in .tip-toeing looking every directon for someone . Anyone . To know where I was . The bright sun was blocking the view as if it was trying to guard something . After a while , I crawled over to a batterd , Old tree house with lots of instruments around it as if it was a crowd . I peeked through the window to see if anybody was there or living there . Nobody was there . The birds was sweetly sing away make me sleep . Peacfully , I fell to the emerald green grass and slept . I woke up because the sun was hurting my eyes . I got up to see what I could do then a light bulb lit up in my head . “I could decorate the tree house !” I whispered to my self . Eventually , I grabbed some hay and nailed it into the roof to get a bit of colour to it and brighten it up . I wandered quiet a while away from the tree house and got some brown coloured wood . After decorating it my friend (Daisy)came and helped me finsh the decorting .

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  9.   Aamina I Says:

    It was coming to the end of summer, when I went back into my old tree house, I looked out of window and all the rabbits went back to there homes. I was gray outside.

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  10.   annalese Says:

    A scary wind wistled and knocked everthing out of the tree house.The birds tweet “Rain Rain go away come back again an other day” in a soft sweet voice.The golden grass swished side to side. Suddenly, the tree moved with a creek…

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  11.   Lauren Says:

    The tall crooked tree, stood as still as a statue in the gargantuan field. Suddenly, there was a loud BANG, and it came from the kitchen. Then the tree tilted to the left a little bit. Quietly, a head peeped out of the door and saw me standing shocked in the centre of the field. My jaw almost dropped to the floor. He came down to me and asked me what I wanted in a very vulgar way.

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