Sep
17

Holly 100WC

Filed Under (General News) by on 17-09-2012 and tagged ,

As I  looked behind me, I saw… a mysterious  door.  It looked as if it had arms. I looked closer. Then it opened one eye, then the other. I was bewildered and shocked.

“Hello what’s your name?” I asked. The door said it didn’t have a name.

“ Please  may  I  come  in ?” I asked the old door. The door said I could come in if I give him some oil. So I got  the oil can out of my bag and put some oil on his hinges. After that i sat in my chair and had some tea.

 



One Response to “Holly 100WC”

  1.   Mrs Duxbury Says:

    Dear Holly, what a great piece of writing form you, well done. I love the sentence ‘I was bewildered and shocked.’ Can you spot the simple error that you have made?

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